Friday, September 28, 2007

Editing Freshman Essay

"This is a catch phrase that we are all familiar with."
-We all heard this catch phrase before and have an understanding about it.

"It made me realize how reckless I had been throughout the earlier part of my career writing for the newspaper."
-After I went to this seminar, I came to realize how reckless my earlier career writing for the newspaper became.

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