Editing Freshman Essay

"This is a catch phrase that we are all familiar with."
-We all heard this catch phrase before and have an understanding about it.

"It made me realize how reckless I had been throughout the earlier part of my career writing for the newspaper."
-After I went to this seminar, I came to realize how reckless my earlier career writing for the newspaper became.

Essay Assignment Number Two

I'm not sure what I'm going to write about for the second essay yet. I haven't really heard any offensive words lately so I don't think I'm going to write about choice one. I many write about food because I feel like what you eat has an impact on everything-how tired you are, how moody you are, and how you feel all day long. I didn't grow up in poverty so I can't write about choice number three. I have a few favorite possessions so I might write about choice four. My favorite possession is probably my truck because it's all mine and without it I couldn't drive. It almost gives me freedom because without it I couldn't go wherever I wanted whenever I wanted.